Kiss In The Rain

Oh, wow! This is really great. I like it a lot. :) I'll be waiting for more!

I don't care what anyone else says. I think this will be a promising book. Don't stop! :D :D :D Well thank you very much! :D :D :D

And then I bit his face. When I get nervous I do stupid stuff..... You bit his face? Lol. Love makes us do crazy things, no? Love is a weird ...

-Description- You really don't have any imagery at all. I don't know anything about how the characters settings or events look, feel or smell. I need to. It will make ...

Hello, Autumn. A very nice piece of work. I disagree with some of your previous reviews. This is a fine prologue; it isn't supposed to give away the story. And ...

Did you two do the eyeball avatars on purpose? Just curious... Yes, actually, we did. Though, he's quite the cheesbrain.... (lol, kidding)

Ha! I liked the idea, Em, really. It was sweet and simple. A nice piece of work. I have a suggestion. You really liked your Dandelion Kingdom; why not write ...

Prologue It’s weird to see the streets of this city again. My buddies and I haven’t been here since 1963. During that summer something happened that neither of us will ...